left the old one, starting a new one.... (cross-posting from multiply...so don't think nobody read this!haha)

A new blog, a new me! (hopefully haha)

Old ones from the old blog site....haha most sounds corny haha

Wednesday, May 14, 2008 by cArLo

WARNING!
The poems which aren't exactly poems that you are about to view are very amateur, childish, corny, -drop here any word fit to your vocabulary-. By viewing these you certify that after reading these you wouldn't be too irrate, or become mad. mentally. in any way. haha

here are compilations of prose (which I am not proud of hahaha ut am sharing anyway) from my old blog.
Note: my 'poems' aren't really poems because whatever i think, i just type it down...

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KIM

THIS ISN'T A POEM. i don't know. i don't classify mine as poems... i just write it like this... what i think i write down (or type) in this way, and this is just what happens..
anyway, this 'poem-which-isn't-a-poem' is about two different persons with the same name:

KIM

Kim
the name of the girl
that made me watch the show
that i never watched before.

Kim
just the same name
my once classmate in school
that smiled once on me.

Kim
the name of two different persons
that totally amused me
and made me fall.

Kim
the name of great beginnings
one gave out harmony
and one gave me warmth.

Kim
the name i knew twice
so beautiful and nice
made it beat twice.

Kim
the name which meaning i don't know
but had meaning in my world
because of two people i adore.

Kim
the name when i hear before
i think of ice cream and popsicles
but now totally different.

Kim
the name of two people
which i can't be with together
won't be with anymore.

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this one I made 2 years ago...

Haven't Had Love

I haven't loved anyone yet.
Everytime I feel something
for someone
I analyze it.
I reflect on it.
And it all comes down to one:
It's just attraction
It's just a crush
It's just physical.

I still haven't met that person
The one who'll touch my heart
Make it beat faster
So intense you just have to hold on to something
or you'll float in the air.
And forget all your cares
in the world
Because he or she's beside you
With you
To hold your hand
To tell you that everything's okay
That everything will be
Because you'll be in it together

The one person who'll love you
Despite all your insecurities and
your flaws
The one you think you'd spend all
your life with
Grow old together
Watch everything else around you
grow old and die
And new ones flourish and grow
See all of natures beauties
and mysteries

I still haven't loved anyone yet
Maybe it's not yet the time
But everyone I know already had relationships
Or are in relationships
In serious ones.
People I know that are younger than me
And people that have had a relationship
at a young age
Why am I not like them?
Why haven't I had a relationship?
Why don't I love?
Why can't I love?
Why can't I feel love?
Why haven't I loved anyone yet?
It still hasn't come to me yet.
The feeling of being in love intensely with someone
Only physical attraction.
Only a crush.
Only that.

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this one I did in tagalog, but it still had no pattern or counts to it. haha I made this when I had a crush on someone I didn't know at all....

Di Kakilala

J____ O_____ N_____

Ng una kang masilayan
Ang kariktan ng iyong mukha
Ang kagandahan ng ‘yong katawan
Ang aking loob’y napasaiyo.

Parang napuno ng sigla
At muli itong napasaya
Sa iyo lamang pagdating
Ako’y iyong naiba.

Sa bawat sulyap sa iyo
Bigat na aking dinadala
Ay pawang gumagaan
At aking nakakayanan

Di alam aking gagawin
Sa tuwing ika’y nakatingin
Nahihiya na iyong makita
Ang aking sobrang paghanga

Laging nahihila pababa
Palayo aking mga tingin
Sa tuwing nagkakasalubong
Ang ating mga mata

Nahihiyang maipaalam
Ang laman ng aking puso
Sa isang magandang nilalang
Na aking nakakasama

Ngunit kahit di magkakilala
At ‘di magkalapit lagi
Mula sa malayo nalang
Ako’y iibig sa iyo.

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all too corny, huh?

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